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The Echo of The Universal poetical Field
Response…

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For me it was pleasantly and interestingly visit in the poetic field ”Poet’s For Integrity” …
Where I have presented some poem from the poetic collection for consideration …

LIFE DWELLS IN PAIN

Submitted By: GOGESHVILI

Review: What a beautiful and universal poem, my friend. Certainly, as children of God, we experience all of the same processes afforded humans in this finite world. You have touched my soul with your awesome writing talent!

Sheri.



LIFE DWELLS IN PAIN

Submitted By: GOGESHVILI

Review: This poem seems to me to contain the practice of dealing with pain at least with Bio feedback. Visualization regarding removing the cause and provides a positive dimension within which to perceive pain and its nature. The last two lines of each stanza are fantastic and so creatively unique. A most inspirational experience to read this poem and spend time in re-reads and musing over the word picks and metaphors.

martin

LIFE DWELLS IN PAIN

Submitted By: GOGESHVILI

Review: What a beautiful and universal poem, my friend. Certainly, as children of God, we experience all of the same processes afforded humans in this finite world. You have touched my soul with your awesome writing talent! Sheri.

LIFE DWELLS IN PAIN…

Submitted By: GOGESHVILI

Review: Such a beautiful in-dept poem on the true meaning of suffering in life. Pain is inevitable, the sooner we can accept the pain, as a reminder to life, one day it will be gone forever, when the Creator puts a mortal end to one’ S suffering. I can live until that day. Great write...

peace, racha.

THE THOUGHT - HUNG DOWN
IN THE TEAR - AS A DREAM
AND TREASON

Submitted By: GOGESHVILI

Review: WOW, WOW, WOW… What a great poem of discovery and natural maturation Excellent metaphors and so literary containing hidden meanings that surface with the imagination of the reader. Beautiful and lovely in writer word and lovely in written word and reader’s experience.
Martin

THE THOUGHT - HUNG DOWN
IN THE TEAR - AS A DREAM
AND TREASON

Submitted By: GOGESHVILI

Review: I love how this poem turns a negative info a positive thought out!! Excellent!

Sheri

THE THOUGHT - HUNG DOWN
IN THE TEAR - AS A DREAM
AND TREASON

Submitted By: GOGESHVILI

Review: Beautiful metaphoric language, nature blooming Forth into lafe.

Peace, racha.

LIFE WAS DOZING,
THE LADY-BIRD FLEW
OVER THE VERGE OF THE DEATH

Submitted By: GOGESHVILI

Review: Sometimes the point is of the writing is lost in the translation I don’t feel so… Writes… the choices bring the cleansing For a brighter day, a brighter insight, and a brighter planet by the flight, of the appearance, of the Lady Bird. Change comes from the darkness within the process of the cleansing Wonderfully constructed and presented Strong emotive value,

Phillis.

LIFE WAS DOZING,
THE LADY-BIRD FLEW
OVER THE VERGE OF THE DEATH

Submitted By: GOGESHVILI

Review: This poem reads as if it were mythology. I enjoyed the imagery and feeling that I was being transported back to the beginning of time. AB
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LIFE WAS DOZING,
THE LADY-BIRD FLEW
OVER THE VERGE OF THE DEATH

Submitted By: GOGESHVILI

Review: Great and enticing title Powerful commentary on male dominance. The last two stanza are so creative in the description of the female contribution of the female contribution to society and the world as well as bringing the world. The last stanza is totally crafted as a superb literary poem within itself.

Martin

LIFE WAS DOZING,
THE LADY-BIRD FLEW
OVER THE VERGE OF THE DEATH

Submitted By: GOGESHVILI

Review: Indeed does our humanness get in the way of life and vice-versa. These ways of course are and always will be universal as long as finite fills the earth Although, I do not believe in fate, (but destiny)… the poem ends with a light in the hope and belief of better things to come! I don’t know if we will ever learn, I doubt it, as history speaks for itself. But we continue, the masses do, to hope and pray for the better.
Sheri

LIFE WAS DOZING,
THE LADY-BIRD FLEW
OVER THE VERGE OF THE DEATH

Submitted By: GOGESHVILI

Review: Beautifully deep and so profound, all that can bring about life, hope to a dying world. Peace, racha.

LIFE WAS DOZING,
THE LADY-BIRD FLEW
OVER THE VERGE OF THE DEATH

Submitted By: GOGESHVILI

Review: I’m not sure I fully comprehend your meaning and yet, your words stir something deep within. May I ask what language the writing is? I find it fascinating. Your style is very different from mine but I appreciate the depth and soulfulness you express.

Dulcinea

Submitted By: GOGESHVILI

Review: Outstanding _ Bravo & Oncore!! What more can be said?

Submitted By: GOGESHVILI

Review: indeed life is a satire filled pretense and soul. Soul to know what is right and what is wrong, pretense remains ever the tempt of the finite… great poem!

Sheri




ALL HAIL TO THE PURPLE RACE

Submitted By: GOGESHVILI

Review: Isn’t it ironic that nature takes the pain to show life in all its beauty… for every eye to see. But this poem is a reminder, that be we rose or violet blue, we too will know this feeling when our day is through. Great write, food for thought.

Peace, racha.

Submitted By: GOGESHVILI
Review:
Lovely images with such deep meaning. Beautiful timing with a climax. I enjoyed this very much with your experienced wordsmithing…

Phillis.

Submitted By: GOGESHVILI

Review: A poem that is universal. It profiles the inner Self of sadness combined with multi dimensions of love… Flows smoothly and takes the reader on a journey of reality. Filled with sadness and love yet leaves the option as to how one reacts or responds to life as a personal choice and not the victim of circumstances. This poem subtly emphasizes so many insights to living and choices.
Martin

THE OLD BIRD

Submitted By: GOGESHVILI

Review: This little old bird sound a lot like me hoping to become a nesting bird forever young and free. Great write, welcome to this site, this old bird will be singing new songs ans daylight turns to night.
WELCOME… tee, hee!

Peace, racha.

Submitted By: GOGESHVILI

Review: A great metaphor here, 3 quatrains filled with reality of aging and certainly you leave the door wide open with the last three verses which to me are quite powerful and still leave the end result up to the individual reader.

Sheri

Submitted By: GOGESHVILI

Review: Very, very creative. Most meaningful as related to the concept of a life cycle. The last stanza is so true. It says that age is not a number. It means only one thing ie how long one has breathing on his/her own regardless of the form of life. The word pic in the last line is a tremendous summary .
Martin

Submitted By: GOGESHVILI

Review: A very beautiful poem that touches the heart…

Sheri

Submitted By: GOGESHVILI

Review: Written with a depth rarely seen outside the motherland Janri _ kudos x _

Agashkina (daughter of Nicholas).

Submitted By: GOGESHVILI

Review: Replete with word pics and balanced with emotional pallattes.
I love the title. It brings the reader immediately into the depth of the poem. I love the transition into the meaning of creation being a healer even tho’ facing darkness is still the challenge.
The last stanza is so powerful and conceptual and allows the reader to expand his/her imagination of conceptual of application to life.

Martin

Submitted By: GOGESHVILI

Review: Vastly deep in metaphor. Where is the affection and compassion this write seems to bring forth. You are a writer of status and it is a pleasure to be able to walk through your home of writings. The library door is open I suspect with more on the ethers to be shared… Very vivid write,

Phillis/Light.

THE BULL

Submitted By: GOGESHVILI

Review: Much power and strength is visible in this write. The metaphor compares both the fiery bull and the hot-tempered man. Great comparisons are portrayed.

Peace, racha.

Submitted By: GOGESHVILI

Review: This is pure and raw in its violence and not a poem for the faint of heart. Well structured and most effective.

AB

THOUGH HE IS
A CELEBRATED CLOWN…

According to my son’s drawing

Submitted By: GOGESHVILI

Review: A most well crafted love poem. The interplay of experiences and Feelings by the king, queen, clown and full of shenanigans and zest!

Sheri

Submitted By: GOGESHVILI

Review: Are we actually in the presence… Or simply someone who has discovered a great poet and wishes to share? Either way _ great stuff & a rare treat!
Writing which sets a standard and raises the bar:)

asa

Submitted By: GOGESHVILI

Review: To break out of the mold is a pushing and tugging process which takes perseverance and fortitude. Illusion/alone time, all part of it, as I see it. The human mind is of such a low vibration, however, the lotus blooms in the awakening…

Phillis\Light.

Submitted By: GOGESHVILI

Review: I believe this is true of most humans at one time or another. We fight against all that makes us human and therefore vulnerable. Create poem.

AB PS. Welcome to the site.

Submitted By: GOGESHVILI

Review: This poem seems to me to contain the practice of dealing with pain at least with Bio feedback, Visualization regarding removing the cause and provides a positive dimension within which to perceive pain and its nature. The last two lines of each stanza are Fantastic and so creatively unique. A most inspirational experience to read this poem and spend time in re-reads and musing over the word pick and metaphors.

Martin

GO AHEAD!

Submitted By: GOGESHVILI

Review: The wings of Forgiveness should not be difficult to find but low and behold it seems they are. This talks of just that, and shows the need to look the other way…
Another of your vast image laden writes, with strength of purpose, and depth of knowing.
Phillis.

HOLD IN HIGH RESPECT
THE VIRTUE BESTOWED ON YOU

Submitted By: GOGESHVILI

Review: These words are penned from a grateful heart, telling me that the gift we received is ours, given to us to use not abuse in this life. We mast sift out good from the bad through our choices for the heavens expect nothing less from us great reminder.
Peace, racha

HOLD IN HIGH RESPECT
THE VIRTUE BESTOWED ON YOU

Submitted By: GOGESHVILI

Review: And so it is, that the higher orders are adhered to, and the lower orders are not. The messade within is a strong one,

Phillis.

HOLD IN HIGH RESPECT
THE VIRTUE BESTOWED ON YOU

Submitted By: GOGESHVILI

Review: Whatever our roots… whatever our county… the nature of the human heart does not change. Thanks for sharing this valuable poem.

AB



HOLD IN HIGH RESPECT
THE VIRTUE BESTOWED ON YOU

Submitted By: GOGESHVILI

Review: Sometimes I am forced to listen to God when Life is at its most painful. God gives me respite fro that pain, He does not inflict it, but He does use it to help me change. Thanks for sharing your poetry,

AB queen Author’s Profile

HOLD IN HIGH RESPECT
THE VIRTUE BESTOWED ON YOU

Submitted By: GOGESHVILI

Review: Well, I agree. We definitely need to live for ourselves, through out own morals and convictions, and not to impress others or through others. Already, we are world of sheep, not using our own minds, and letting others control us. Respect for others has got to be humanity’s salvation!...

Sheri

HOLD IN HIGH RESPECT
THE VIRTUE BESTOWED ON YOU

Submitted By: GOGESHVILI

Review: A wonderful description how the masses are compelled into conformity by society’s forces and movements and leadership. A most powerful reminder that we each are a person with a unique personhood designed for unique personhood designed for unique expressions designed for unique expressions and creative contribution to life. Let no one make puppets or robots out of us or anyone. The last stanza is Outstanding.
Martin

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